english speakers please!!?
can you guys correct my grammar please!!
Books, coffee and bar
My concept is about a relaxed place and romantic at the same time.
Is a place in which you can go to talk and have fun with friends, your girlfriend or boyfriend or go by yourself and read while you enjoy a coffee.
In the first floor will be a drawning room with books available and 2 tables in which you can read and drink coffee. Passing the drawining room will be the first bar area in which the capacity will be 30 people, the illumination will be tenuous with some candels on the tables.The second floor will be a terrace con lounge furniture. In the two areas you can eat, and drink any kind of beverage.
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Books, Coffee and Bar.
My concept is about a relaxed place which is romantic at the same time.
It is a place in which you can go to talk and have fun with your friends, your girlfriend or boyfriend or just go by yourself, and read whilst you enjoy a coffee.
On the first floor, there will be a drawing room with books available, and 2 tables in which you can read and drink coffee. Passing the drawing room, there will be the first bar area which can hold the capacity of 30 people. The illumination will be tenuous with some candles on the tables.The second floor will be a terrace with lounge furniture. In the two areas you can eat, and drink any kind of beverage.
Hope this helped, I didn’t quite understand what you were trying to say in some parts, but I have corrected it to proper English.
I’ll repeat it but with the correct grammar
Books, coffee and bar.
My concept is about a relaxed place and romantic at the same time.
It is a place in which you can go to talk and have fun with friends, your girlfriend or boyfriend or go by yourself and read while you enjoy a coffee.
On the first floor will be a drawing room with books available and 2 tables in which you can read and drink coffee. Passing the drawing room will be the first bar area in which the capacity will be 30 people, the illumination will be tenuous with some candels on the tables.The second floor will be a terrace which includes lounge furniture. In the two areas you can eat, and drink any kind of beverage.
This is good, Good job