http://oldworldbarstools.net/how-does-my-story-sound-so-far/ Find a great selection of elegant and practical bar stools for your home. Thu, 01 Dec 2011 00:02:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 http://oldworldbarstools.net/how-does-my-story-sound-so-far/comment-page-1/#comment-14242 Jim L Fri, 19 Mar 2010 05:49:17 +0000 http://oldworldbarstools.net/how-does-my-story-sound-so-far#comment-14242 Not bad at all. Footsteps don't 'emerge', though. Not bad at all. Footsteps don’t ‘emerge’, though.

]]> http://oldworldbarstools.net/how-does-my-story-sound-so-far/comment-page-1/#comment-14241 readingisknowledge Fri, 19 Mar 2010 05:49:17 +0000 http://oldworldbarstools.net/how-does-my-story-sound-so-far#comment-14241 (CLAP, CLAP, CLAP) oh wow i loved it, i am out of words, are you PUBLISHED ? give me more i will buy it if you want. seriously this is the first time i have answered a question about what do you think of my story that i have actually not one critique, you must be doing this for years now. you are really talented and i am out of words to describe just how much. your story kept me reading fast because i wanted to know what happened next, even before i was done with the line i was reading i dont know if you can understand this. i am not a person who reads storys that are scary but this one so so grea!!! i am also a writer and there are so many diferent kinds of writer because my stories in no way relate to yours but yours is so good in a way that i could never imagine myself writing it. you are really talented and i could be so critical like i said but this is too good for words but if i knew better words i would say.....well i dont know any so ill just give you ***** !!!! (CLAP, CLAP, CLAP) oh wow i loved it, i am out of words, are you PUBLISHED ? give me more i will buy it if you want.
seriously this is the first time i have answered a question about what do you think of my story that i have actually not one critique, you must be doing this for years now. you are really talented and i am out of words to describe just how much.
your story kept me reading fast because i wanted to know what happened next, even before i was done with the line i was reading i dont know if you can understand this.
i am not a person who reads storys that are scary but this one so so grea!!!
i am also a writer and there are so many diferent kinds of writer because my stories in no way relate to yours but yours is so good in a way that i could never imagine myself writing it.
you are really talented and i could be so critical like i said but this is too good for words but if i knew better words i would say…..well i dont know any so ill just give you ***** !!!!

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