I rewrote this short intro. What do you think now?

Wednesday, September 16th, 2009 at 5:22 pm

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jen says:

September 16, 2009 at 5:22 pm

You can write so dont stop
i think you have the potential so not matter what anyone says here finsh this story and write more
Cassanova says:

September 16, 2009 at 5:22 pm

Just being nitpicky, you used "2 kinds of people" and "thee A.M." you need to pick either writing the numbers out, or using the numericals. It needs to be consistent. I’d also suggest doing text/block breaks imbetween dialogue because I got lost quite often. It’s not bad, but it needs work. You have a way with words but you definitely need to consider formatting and the flow of text.

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