Comments on: Please help! what do you think? Need feedback?!?

By: Zereptv

Zereptv — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 13:00:48 +0000

this is good
and i like reading Jonas fan fictions
not because there in them
because there fans are good writers
you are good i like the details
im planing on doing that on mine
but its new so theres a little details
not many good luck

By: SassyAngel

SassyAngel — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 13:00:48 +0000

Honestly, I didn’t even read it. The plot is just so, overdone. Like extremely. If you go to fan-fiction, Quizilla, or Mibba, those plots are the worst. Their just popular because of the Jonas Brothers, that’s all. The plot is to overdone. Just use some imagination, something you think of on your own. Trust me, you will have more fun writing it, since there are hardly any limitaions, in a mystery, or fantasy, or even in a high school story.

Be Creative! ^.- Good Luck.

By: Jade

Jade — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 13:00:48 +0000

I like the Jonas Brothers so I read the whole thing. I thought it was good for a fanfiction-type thing. I liked it because it gave a good amount of detail and all of that. It is kind of weird to ask this, but if there is more to this particular story, maybe you could message me and I could read the rest. If there are more stories I would love to read the others too!

By: Casssddddddeeeeeee

Casssddddddeeeeeee — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 13:00:48 +0000

with all do respect it sucks mostly cuz its wit the jonas bros but whatever floats ur boat