k here is a day in the life of crytal jones. im 17 im 6-4 i wiegh 200 (skinny 4 my hieght & features) i wear a 36 H(30-35 lbs of it) & i have a huge black muscular butt(30-35 lbs) 60-70 lbs of boobs & as$ out of the 200 i got big strong legs & back & flat abs now u got a picture 1st i wake up & have 2 be helped out of bed by my bf(i cant lift my chest off the ground bcuz of the boob wieght) & get dressed (can’t wear stuff from a few weeks ago bcuz my boobs & butt keep gettin bigger and bigger, i used too be soo small in middle school in 7th grade i used to be 5 foot and wiegh like 70 pounds now i’m a junior and i’m bigger than 1/2 the boys at my school and i wiegh 200 pounds once i was in a dressing room & the shirt i was wearing ripped because i had stretched my chest i need help tying my shoes cuz if i tried 2 bend over i wouldn’t b able 2 stand straight up again without help. the office chairs, i can’t fit my a$$ into those things because my butt is so wide so i have to stand i go 2 skool then i workout eveyday i run 4 miles to and from school and haven’t lost a pound because its muscle(need 2 b strong so i dont fall ovr) which im cool w/ xcept 4 the crunchs(2 much boobage) & the jumping(2 much jiggling). then i get home, we do watever, eat, watch a movie or go somewere, then we go to bed & he feels my boobs whenever he wants like @ movies and pretty much anywere im ok w/ when ever me and my boyfriend go to the movies i have to put the arm rests up because once again my booty is too freckin big my a$$ can’t fit into anything not the drivers seat not office chairs not onto a bike not a swing set nothing sometimes i can even feel the edge of my booty skim the door when i walk through a little to the side then because my butt and legs are so big when i try to workout w/ my bf i can’t fit in 1/2 the machines then they got the safety bar 4 tred mills those are tight fits also my legs and butt are too big and muscular and then ontop of all this i play b-ball but that is the only problem with my butt . I im not getting a reductioni feel fine back wise because i love my size and so does my boyfriend after the stuff i told you i still like me the way i am but am i too big? y do i keep growing i am a virgin believe it or not and i just keep growing, Y? what do i do with my A$$ i don’t want a reduction but i can’t fit into all those places & things wat do i do im not getting a reductioni feel fine back wise because i love my size and so does my boyfriend after the stuff i told you i still like me the way i am but am i too big? y do i keep growing i am a virgin believe it or not and i just keep growing, Y? don’t say see a doc cuz he said its all good and i can’t get a reduction not enough money what do i do with my A$$ i don’t want a reduction but i can’t fit into all those places & things wat do i do im not conserned about my wieght and size i love those both but wat do you thnk of my situation with my butt and bust?

k here is a day in the life of crytal jones. im 17 im 6-4 i wiegh 200 (skinny 4 my hieght & features) i wear a 36 H(30-35 lbs of it) & i have a huge black muscular butt(30-35 lbs) 60-70 lbs of boobs & as$ out of the 200 i got big strong legs & back & flat abs now u got a picture 1st i wake up & have 2 be helped out of bed by my bf(i cant lift my chest off the ground bcuz of the boob wieght) & get dressed (can’t wear stuff from a few weeks ago bcuz my boobs & butt keep gettin bigger and bigger, i used too be soo small in middle school in 7th grade i used to be 5 foot and wiegh like 70 pounds now i’m a junior and i’m bigger than 1/2 the boys at my school and i wiegh 200 pounds once i was in a dressing room & the shirt i was wearing ripped because i had stretched my chest i need help tying my shoes cuz if i tried 2 bend over i wouldn’t b able 2 stand straight up again without help. the office chairs, i can’t fit my a$$ into those things because my butt is so wide so i have to stand i go 2 skool then i workout(need 2 b strong so i dont fall ovr) which im cool w/ xcept 4 the crunchs(2 much boobage) & the jumping(2 much jiggling). then i get home, we do watever, eat, watch a movie or go somewere, then we go to bed & he feels my boobs whenever he wants like @ movies and pretty much anywere im ok w/ when ever me and my boyfriend go to the movies i have to put the arm rests up because once again my booty is too freckin big my a$$ can’t fit into anything not the drivers seat not office chairs not onto a bike not a swing set nothing sometimes i can even feel the edge of my booty skim the door when i walk through a little to the side then because my butt and legs are so big when i try to workout w/ my bf i can’t fit in 1/2 the machines then they got the safety bar 4 tred mills those are tight fits also and then ontop of all this i play b-ball but that is the only problem with my butt . IM NOT FAT IM JUST TALL AND HAVE A MAJOR HOURGLASS FIGURE im not getting a reductioni feel fine back wise because i love my size and so does my boyfriend after the stuff i told you i still like me the way i am but am i too big? y do i keep growing i am a virgin believe it or not and i just keep growing, Y? what do i do with my A$$ i don’t want a reduction but i can’t fit into all those places & things wat do i do

k here is a day in the life of crytal jones. im 17 im 6-4 i wiegh 200 (skinny 4 my hieght & features) i wear a 36 H(30-35 lbs of it) & i have a huge black muscular butt(30-35 lbs) 60-70 lbs of boobs & as$ out of the 200 i got big strong legs & back & flat abs now u got a picture 1st i wake up & have 2 be helped out of bed by my bf(i cant lift my chest off the ground bcuz of the boob wieght) & get dressed (can’t wear stuff from a few weeks ago bcuz my boobs & butt keep gettin bigger and bigger, i used too be soo small in middle school in 7th grade i used to be 5 foot and wiegh like 70 pounds now i’m a junior and i’m bigger than 1/2 the boys at my school and i wiegh 200 pounds once i was in a dressing room & the shirt i was wearing ripped because i had stretched my chest i need help tying my shoes cuz if i tried 2 bend over i wouldn’t b able 2 stand straight up again without help. the office chairs, i can’t fit my a$$ into those things because my butt is so wide so i have to stand i go 2 skool then i workout(need 2 b strong so i dont fall ovr) which im cool w/ xcept 4 the crunchs(2 much boobage) & the jumping(2 much jiggling). then i get home, we do watever, eat, watch a movie or go somewere, then we go to bed & he feels my boobs whenever he wants like @ movies and pretty much anywere im ok w/ when ever me and my boyfriend go to the movies i have to put the arm rests up because once again my booty is too freckin big my a$$ can’t fit into anything not the drivers seat not office chairs not onto a bike not a swing set nothing sometimes i can even feel the edge of my booty skim the door when i walk through a little to the side then because my butt and legs are so big when i try to workout w/ my bf i can’t fit in 1/2 the machines then they got the safety bar 4 tred mills those are tight fits also and then ontop of all this i play b-ball but that is the only problem with my butt . i feel fine back wise because i love my size and so does my boyfriend after the stuff i told you i still like me the way i am but am i too big? y do i keep growing i am a virgin believe it or not and i just keep growing, Y? what do i do with my A$$ i don’t want a reduction but i can’t fit into all those places & things wat do i do

k here is a day in the life of crytal jones. im 17 im 6-4 i wiegh 200 (skinny 4 my hieght & features) i wear a 36 H(30-35 lbs of it) & i have a huge black muscular butt(30-35 lbs) 60-70 lbs of boobs & as$ out of the 200 i got big strong legs & back & flat abs now u got a picture 1st i wake up & have 2 be helped out of bed by my bf(i cant lift my chest off the ground bcuz of the boob wieght) & get dressed (can’t wear stuff from a few weeks ago bcuz my boobs & butt keep gettin bigger and bigger, i used too be soo small in middle school in 7th grade i used to be 5 foot and wiegh like 70 pounds now i’m a junior and i’m bigger than 1/2 the boys at my school and i wiegh 200 pounds once i was in a dressing room & the shirt i was wearing ripped because i had stretched my chest i need help tying my shoes cuz if i tried 2 bend over i wouldn’t b able 2 stand straight up again without help. the office chairs, i can’t fit my a$$ into those things because my butt is so wide so i have to stand i go 2 skool then i workout(need 2 b strong so i dont fall ovr) which im cool w/ xcept 4 the crunchs(2 much boobage) & the jumping(2 much jiggling). then i get home, we do watever, eat, watch a movie or go somewere, then we go to bed & he feels my boobs whenever he wants like @ movies and pretty much anywere im ok w/ when ever me and my boyfriend go to the movies i have to put the arm rests up because once again my booty is too freckin big my a$$ can’t fit into anything not the drivers seat not office chairs not onto a bike not a swing set nothing sometimes i can even feel the edge of my booty skim the door when i walk through a little to the side then because my butt and legs are so big when i try to workout w/ my bf i can’t fit in 1/2 the machines then they got the safety bar 4 tred mills those are tight fits also and then ontop of all this i play b-ball but that is the only problem with my butt . IM NOT FAT IM JUST TALL AND HAVE A MAJOR HOURGLASS FIGURE im not getting a reductioni feel fine back wise because i love my size and so does my boyfriend after the stuff i told you i still like me the way i am but am i too big? y do i keep growing i am a virgin believe it or not and i just keep growing, Y? what do i do with my A$$ i don’t want a reduction but i can’t fit into all those places & things wat do i do

k here is a day in the life of crytal jones. im 17 im 6-4 i wiegh 200 (skinny 4 my hieght & features) i wear a 36 H(30-35 lbs of it) & i have a huge black muscular butt(30-35 lbs) 60-70 lbs of boobs & as$ out of the 200 i got big strong legs & back & flat abs now u got a picture 1st i wake up & have 2 be helped out of bed by my bf(i cant lift my chest off the ground bcuz of the boob wieght) & get dressed (can’t wear stuff from a few weeks ago bcuz my boobs & butt keep gettin bigger and bigger, i used too be soo small in middle school in 7th grade i used to be 5 foot and wiegh like 70 pounds now i’m a junior and i’m bigger than 1/2 the boys at my school and i wiegh 200 pounds once i was in a dressing room & the shirt i was wearing ripped because i had stretched my chest i need help tying my shoes cuz if i tried 2 bend over i wouldn’t b able 2 stand straight up again without help. the office chairs, i can’t fit my a$$ into those things because my butt is so wide so i have to stand i go 2 skool then i workout eveyday i run 4 miles to and from school and haven’t lost a pound because its muscle(need 2 b strong so i dont fall ovr) which im cool w/ xcept 4 the crunchs(2 much boobage) & the jumping(2 much jiggling). then i get home, we do watever, eat, watch a movie or go somewere, then we go to bed & he feels my boobs whenever he wants like @ movies and pretty much anywere im ok w/ when ever me and my boyfriend go to the movies i have to put the arm rests up because once again my booty is too freckin big my a$$ can’t fit into anything not the drivers seat not office chairs not onto a bike not a swing set nothing sometimes i can even feel the edge of my booty skim the door when i walk through a little to the side then because my butt and legs are so big when i try to workout w/ my bf i can’t fit in 1/2 the machines then they got the safety bar 4 tred mills those are tight fits also my legs and butt are too big and muscular and then ontop of all this i play b-ball but that is the only problem with my butt . I im not getting a reductioni feel fine back wise because i love my size and so does my boyfriend after the stuff i told you i still like me the way i am but am i too big? y do i keep growing i am a virgin believe it or not and i just keep growing, Y? what do i do with my A$$ i don’t want a reduction but i can’t fit into all those places & things wat do i do im not getting a reductioni feel fine back wise because i love my size and so does my boyfriend after the stuff i told you i still like me the way i am but am i too big? y do i keep growing i am a virgin believe it or not and i just keep growing, Y? don’t say see a doc cuz he said its all good and i can’t get a reduction not enough money what do i do with my A$$ i don’t want a reduction but i can’t fit into all those places & things wat do i do im not conserned about my wieght and size i love those both but wat do you thnk of my situation with my butt and bust?

k here is a day in the life of crytal jones. im 17 im 6-4 i wiegh 200 (skinny 4 my hieght & features) i wear a 36 H(30-35 lbs of it) & i have a huge black muscular butt(30-35 lbs) 60-70 lbs of boobs & as$ out of the 200 i got big strong legs & back & flat abs now u got a picture 1st i wake up & have 2 be helped out of bed by my bf(i cant lift my chest off the ground bcuz of the boob wieght) & get dressed (can’t wear stuff from a few weeks ago bcuz my boobs & butt keep gettin bigger and bigger, i used too be soo small in middle school in 7th grade i used to be 5 foot and wiegh like 70 pounds now i’m a junior and i’m bigger than 1/2 the boys at my school and i wiegh 200 pounds once i was in a dressing room & the shirt i was wearing ripped because i had stretched my chest i need help tying my shoes cuz if i tried 2 bend over i wouldn’t b able 2 stand straight up again without help. the office chairs, i can’t fit my a$$ into those things because my butt is so wide so i have to stand i go 2 skool then i workout eveyday i run 4 miles to and from school and haven’t lost a pound because its muscle(need 2 b strong so i dont fall ovr) which im cool w/ xcept 4 the crunchs(2 much boobage) & the jumping(2 much jiggling). then i get home, we do watever, eat, watch a movie or go somewere, then we go to bed & he feels my boobs whenever he wants like @ movies and pretty much anywere im ok w/ when ever me and my boyfriend go to the movies i have to put the arm rests up because once again my booty is too freckin big my a$$ can’t fit into anything not the drivers seat not office chairs not onto a bike not a swing set nothing sometimes i can even feel the edge of my booty skim the door when i walk through a little to the side then because my butt and legs are so big when i try to workout w/ my bf i can’t fit in 1/2 the machines then they got the safety bar 4 tred mills those are tight fits also my legs and butt are too big and muscular and then ontop of all this i play b-ball but that is the only problem with my butt . I im not getting a reductioni feel fine back wise because i love my size and so does my boyfriend after the stuff i told you i still like me the way i am but am i too big? y do i keep growing i am a virgin believe it or not and i just keep growing, Y? what do i do with my A$$ i don’t want a reduction but i can’t fit into all those places & things wat do i do im not getting a reductioni feel fine back wise because i love my size and so does my boyfriend after the stuff i told you i still like me the way i am but am i too big? y do i keep growing i am a virgin believe it or not and i just keep growing, Y? don’t say see a doc cuz he said its all good and i can’t get a reduction not enough money what do i do with my A$$ i don’t want a reduction but i can’t fit into all those places & things wat do i do

Okay so I know I have asked this many times, but I have it longer now. What I want your opinion on is if I describe everything that my character smells, hears, sees, and thinks well enough for my reader to understand. Please no copying…

All I could see from the backseat of the car was advertiments for restaurants and “Adopt a Highway” signs. My Golden Retriever, Lulu, was resting her head on my thigh, sleeping heavily. The woman in the front seat I call mom was singing to the 70’s music on the radio. Dad was just sitting in the drivers’ seat glaring at the curvy roads ahead, not even listening to me protest about our five hour road trip.
“Now honey, when I was a boy I once drove from back home in Illinois all the way to Washington with my six annoyin’ lil’ brothers and sisters. And you know how long that took?” I didn’t respond. He didn’t say a word either.
Dead silence.
The highway eventually led to a country road with apartments and ranch houses lined up behind a newly painted white fence. I glanced out ahead the front window to see if the there was a main road up ahead so we could get some food to cure my growling stomach. Nothing. Just trees, manure, barns, and fields.
Besides the smell, Wisconsin seemed pretty nice. The houses weren’t too old fashioned, you could barely find an busy sidewalks like there was in New York, and everyone taking a morning walk that we passed seemed to be kind. But then again, I thought, don’t judge a book by it’s cover.
A sudden jolt shook the car awaking my dog, Lulu from her nap as dad led the car onto a long gravel path. The drive led to a house that was wide with a low roof. A barn, broken window and all was set off about fifty yards away from the brick house. Open windows in the front showed off rooms that looked like they belonged to a family.
“We’re here. Get your bags ready.” My dad ordered from the front seat. I looked at his handsome dark hair and wide chin. Everyone always said I was a perfect resemblance to him. Maybe on the outside, but not the inside, I thought, remembering the force of his arm on mine, grabbing me and pushing me into the car. Tears were coming out of my eyes like a river, as mom had explained. She had said to calm me down, “Stop crying, sweetie, you’ll flood our house.” But it didn’t help.
Dad never told where we were going or why. All I knew was that I was in Wisconsin from reading a sign at the state border.
“Rylee Romano, get out of the car now. Me and your mom have an important business meeting soon, and we’ll miss our flight if you don’t get a move on.” Dad boomed. He was now standing outside of the car, holding a duffel bag. I wondered to myself how he had packed all three bags without me knowing. Also, if they were really going on a business trip. As far as I was concerned, my parents worked in completely different fields.
“Rylee!”
“Oh, sorry. Coming!” I staggered out of the SUV with Lulu trotting behind, armed with two duffel bags.
Waiting at the front porch was an older lady, probably in her 50’s, waving at me and dad and mom frantically. I hoped that this woman wouldn’t be caring for me while my parents were on their ‘business trip’. And I got my spirit’s up way to high.
Up close, the woman didn’t look as ugly as I had imagined. Her slightly gray hair was braided cascading down her back and was wearing a midnight blue turtle neck with a pair of jeans.
“Hi, Rylee. I’m Marla, you’re great aunt. I will be babysitting you until your mommy and daddy get back. Okay?” Marla sounded like a peppy preschool teacher introducing herself, making me almost want to vomit. It wasn’t a very good first impression if that was what she was trying to do.
“Come one inside. We can have some mint tea.” she said, motioning for us, the Romano’s, to follow her.
We followed Marla inside into a dimly lit hall with photographs of little girls, maybe grandchildren, playing in sand, snow, dirt, leaves, and grass. The hallway brought us to a carpeted living room with cabinet after cabinet with exotic dolls staring at me through the streaky glass. Unfolded laundry lay in a wash basket on an old couch placed up against a wall, facing a small TV. room with cabinet after cabinet with exotic dolls staring at me through the streaky glass. Unfolded laundry lay in a wash basket on an old couch placed up against a wall, facing a small TV.
“Do you like dolls, Rylee?” she seemed to have noticed me staring blankly at her collection. I spun around to see her staring at me with curious eyes .
“No.”
“Oh.”
We continued to a wide room, a kitchen, with beige walls and cowboy wallpaper. There was three stools placed by a shiny marble counter. An island with drawers on all sides had a gallon of milk with a half full cereal bowl and a spoon left on it. Pictures of more children, sloppy pictures torn out of a coloring book, and colorful magnets were covering almost the entire refri
Sorry it is so long