What do you think of my story idea?
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I like it very much but it does sound like a lot of movies with the down-on-his-luck straight-laced guy meeting the quirky free spirited girl. It’s well thought out, you just need to give it something special to make it stand out. Maybe switch Eileen’s and Sean’s roles? Down-on-her-luck straight-laced girl meets quirky free spirited guy? That’s been done too I guess though not as much.
Good luck!
Eh, it sounds a little too cliche. Too many things that you see in books and movies. Try making it different than what people normally see.
Sounds good, Are you on any writing sites? I joined a writing community called http://www.chapteread.com I think you might find it useful. They have great writing tools and posting features for getting critiques and reviews. It’s really easy ! and The other writers give helpful advice. Worth checking out!