What do you think of the start to my Twilight fanfiction?
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It’s okay.
The dialogue is a little off and if someone was writing a fan-fiction about my story then I would want them to at least spell my characters names correctly. Stephenie Meyer should karate chop you in half.
EMMETT
Other than that, just keep doing what detracts your boredom.
It is absolutely fantastic in my opinion!
I love how I start reading your work and I dont stop until I reach the end. Your stories just flow naturally and it makes it so easy to read!
I really like how you have done this from Renesmee’s POV and I like how it is based on her finding out that Bella and Jacob used to love eachother… why couldnt I think of that! lol
Brilliant as always! x
Somebody should karate chop STEPHENIE MEYER in half…
just kidding
Emmett, it’s good you fight boredom, but why Twilight?
You are full of much potential and write very well. Instead of doing fanfic you should aim for your own writing.
The dialogue was a bit off, yes.
Oh, I loved it! You really are so lucky-you can write amazingly-as well as draw! Amazing as always!