Comments on: What do you think of the start to my Twilight fanfiction? http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction/ Find a great selection of elegant and practical bar stools for your home. Thu, 01 Dec 2011 00:02:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: ᴵ ᴸᴼᵛᴱ ᵞᴼᵁ http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction/comment-page-1/#comment-13514 ᴵ ᴸᴼᵛᴱ ᵞᴼᵁ Sat, 27 Feb 2010 10:37:23 +0000 http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction#comment-13514 It's okay. The dialogue is a little off and if someone was writing a fan-fiction about my story then I would want them to at least spell my characters names correctly. Stephenie Meyer should karate chop you in half. EMMETT Other than that, just keep doing what detracts your boredom. It’s okay.

The dialogue is a little off and if someone was writing a fan-fiction about my story then I would want them to at least spell my characters names correctly. Stephenie Meyer should karate chop you in half.

EMMETT

Other than that, just keep doing what detracts your boredom.

]]> By: pinktink http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction/comment-page-1/#comment-13513 pinktink Sat, 27 Feb 2010 10:37:23 +0000 http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction#comment-13513 It is absolutely fantastic in my opinion! I love how I start reading your work and I dont stop until I reach the end. Your stories just flow naturally and it makes it so easy to read! I really like how you have done this from Renesmee's POV and I like how it is based on her finding out that Bella and Jacob used to love eachother... why couldnt I think of that! lol :P Brilliant as always! x It is absolutely fantastic in my opinion!

I love how I start reading your work and I dont stop until I reach the end. Your stories just flow naturally and it makes it so easy to read!

I really like how you have done this from Renesmee’s POV and I like how it is based on her finding out that Bella and Jacob used to love eachother… why couldnt I think of that! lol :P

Brilliant as always! x

]]> By: Nadyaa http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction/comment-page-1/#comment-13515 Nadyaa Sat, 27 Feb 2010 10:37:23 +0000 http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction#comment-13515 Somebody should karate chop STEPHENIE MEYER in half... just kidding :P Somebody should karate chop STEPHENIE MEYER in half…
just kidding :P

]]> By: Cheshire Cat In The Hat http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction/comment-page-1/#comment-13516 Cheshire Cat In The Hat Sat, 27 Feb 2010 10:37:23 +0000 http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction#comment-13516 Emmett, it's good you fight boredom, but why Twilight? You are full of much potential and write very well. Instead of doing fanfic you should aim for your own writing. The dialogue was a bit off, yes. Emmett, it’s good you fight boredom, but why Twilight?

You are full of much potential and write very well. Instead of doing fanfic you should aim for your own writing.

The dialogue was a bit off, yes.

]]> By: Katkin http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction/comment-page-1/#comment-13517 Katkin Sat, 27 Feb 2010 10:37:23 +0000 http://oldworldbarstools.net/what-do-you-think-of-the-start-to-my-twilight-fanfiction#comment-13517 Oh, I loved it! You really are so lucky-you can write amazingly-as well as draw! Amazing as always! Oh, I loved it! You really are so lucky-you can write amazingly-as well as draw! Amazing as always!

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